Friday, 27 October 2023

A different resurrection, perhaps?


A Story in Ballad Form

At the edge of the forest something stirred
and through the dark trees came
a figure cloaked and wrapped about
with a flash of lightening flames.

It muttered spells beneath its breath
and mists rose from the lake
where some poor maid had met her death
when bitten by a snake.

Rosamunda was her name
and beautiful was she,
but the poisoned bite had made her lame
and unable to flee

the cruel huntsman and his bow
who wanted his revenge
for vows she'd taken long ago
on the altar at Stonehenge.

She'd said that she would rather die
than ever be his bride,
so he let his angry arrows fly
to pierce her in her side...

The ancient crone, a witch, in truth
had spied the young girl bleed,
and taken by the fair maid's youth
swore to undo the deed.

" By fire and water, earth and air
you'll not meet your demise!
By all the powers good and fair,
I bid thee maid, arise!"

And slowly from her watery grave
Rosamunda stepped at last
rejoicing as she realised
her troubles all were past,

for the crone had sent the huntsman forth
with promise of reward
if he remained far from this land, OR
his head would meet death's sword!

The above illustration was created by Chelsea Bednar, and offered by her mother, Margaret, for writers to use as inspiration from IGWRT's prompt back in April 2013.
With Halloween approaching, I thought Chelsea's collage deserved to be brought back to life - along with my creepy interpretation, of course. :-)
I hope today's P&STU readers forgive me, if they've read my tale before! 

13 comments:

  1. A tantalizing tale. A girl always needs a good witch on her side. :)

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    1. If only! LOL. Thanks for coming to read. :-)

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    1. Wouldn't I do? Hehehe - I'm getting more like an Old Crone every time I look in the mirror - but no hat or wand, though. :-)

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  3. Where's an ancient crone when you need one? We could do with an army of them.

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    1. How very true...The world might be a better place, then. :-)

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  4. I must have missed this piece at Toads. Love it now!

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    1. Thanks! A Tall Tale is always needed at Halloween, eh? :-)

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  5. I can't remember reading this one at The Garden, so I'm so glad you've shared it again. I really love the tone of the piece, the mixture of fairy tale and fantastical epic. A perfect piece for Halloween.

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    1. Thanks, Magaly. :-) Maybe my inner child popped up to prod my muse, once I started to write it. lol

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  6. Love this, Jinsky. A wonderful Halloween poem.

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