Left a comment but did not seem to take. I so enjoyed your post today. I have missed your 'joyful noise.' Been in retreat this week-end and see everything in a 'mystical' tone. QMM
Agreed - you can read into this whatever you want to read Jinksy. A few words but a depth of meaning behind them.
Your drawings have arrived - sadly the glass was completely shattered but I have found a frame where I can mount all three. I couldn't bear not to see them all, they make such a good combination. What I admire about them is your ability to convey so much with so few lines - I really admire that skill and wish I had it. Thank you so much.
Curiosity Cats can leave a whisker here...but not before noting, please, that I choose to have an award free, tag free, meme free blog. But by all means, talk to me by email - I love to 'chat'...
An interesting thought Penny. Quite philosophical - Dave
ReplyDeleteOooh, I like this....so much back story can be read into this one.
ReplyDeleteVery clever, I do like this :o)
ReplyDeleteWow very profound. It made me smile. I love it!
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That is true! Everything makes waves and these often affect us all, but more often, individually.
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OOOOOOOO that final word tsunami suggests so much in terms of heart ache and maybe heart break! Clever micro!
ReplyDeleteAw, does it have to be "damage"?
ReplyDeleteThose ripples can, indeed, last a long time . . .
ReplyDeleteYou do have a way with words.
ReplyDeleteis that what that sloshing noise is all about?! steven
ReplyDeleteWaves, do go on and on- from
ReplyDeletea rumble to an undertow-?
Chance encounters can leave lasting impressions and sometimes regrets.
ReplyDeleteclever you, a few words, but saying a lot.
ReplyDeleteBeautifully done and very profound. I'm in awe!
ReplyDeleteHave a great week x
Left a comment but did not seem to take. I so enjoyed your post today. I have missed your 'joyful noise.' Been in retreat this week-end and see everything in a 'mystical' tone.
ReplyDeleteQMM
So clever--and perfect photograph to go along with the text!
ReplyDeletesometimes, the stream of life delivers some stones...
ReplyDeleteOh dear, that doesn't sound good. Poor her.
ReplyDelete;-)
This is so deep, and poetic! Excellent!
ReplyDeleteI like the contrast of story with photo - the calm that could turn stormy! Nice microstory.
ReplyDeleteWow..a very sharp piece..very philosophical too.
ReplyDeletewell done!
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Have you a Blessed Week!
hugs
shakira
great thought!!
ReplyDeleteWaves don't linger long. Eventually they dissipate.
ReplyDeleteSo creative deep and poetic !
ReplyDeleteVery short, but very deep. Nice Micro-Fiction.
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PG
Such true words...beautifully written! :-)
ReplyDeleteVery suggestive. I like the many ways that this could go.
ReplyDeleteooh ecological My 140 Hope your week goes well
ReplyDeleteVery well done my friend. I love it :)
ReplyDeleteWell done!
ReplyDeleteAh, with age does come wisdom. :)
ReplyDeleteI think we have all experienced a passing ship in the night that has left us marooned.. a wonderful post, Jinksy, very well penned.
ReplyDeleteGood microfiction...I hope that she finds another 'ship that passes in the night'...soon. Cheers!
ReplyDeleteOoh, I like this cautionary tale, a double entendre. Maybe she should fall for a cruise ship next time--more stable.
ReplyDelete"causing" - what a strange, literal word to put in the middle of a powerful image.
ReplyDeleteShort but "deep".....:-)Hugs
ReplyDeleteYou're definitely a dab hand with these 'limited over matches'!
ReplyDeleteDefinitely true. Those passing ships in the night leave the shore battered and crumbled.
ReplyDeleteAh, so true, so true.
ReplyDeleteAgreed - you can read into this whatever you want to read Jinksy. A few words but a depth of meaning behind them.
ReplyDeleteYour drawings have arrived - sadly the glass was completely shattered but I have found a frame where I can mount all three. I couldn't bear not to see them all, they make such a good combination. What I admire about them is your ability to convey so much with so few lines - I really admire that skill and wish I had it. Thank you so much.
Oh, very good. Way to create a very mysterious scene.
ReplyDeleteShips that pass in the night sounds too much like one night stand.
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