Sea Dreams
Carried on the rising tide of night, flotillas of persistent dreams set sail, while whirlpools circumnavigate my mind - attempt to drown it.
I pray for quiet sleep to steer a course towards a harbour's calm waters. But all the while I hear the cries of ancient nightmares sinking down towards night's ocean bed, biding time to resurface...
Thanks once again to Carrie at The Sunday Muse, where a time warp happens to allow me to post an offering on a Saturday. Ain't time and technology wonderful?
Such a lovely and dreamy poem Jinksy and I love what you did with the image! It pairs the poem beautifully! Thankful for time warps and beautiful poetry!
ReplyDeleteI like the imagery of your poem and also love the stylistic spin you put on the image itself, Jinksy. Those pesky nightmares, waiting to rise again!
ReplyDeleteSailing the sea of dreams, circumnavigating the night, steering clear of nightmares. Happy sailing Jinksy.
ReplyDeleteThat image and poem sync to perfection. So many images pop up.
ReplyDeletesuch a lovely painterly poem -" the cries of ancient nightmares sinking down towards night's ocean bed"
ReplyDeleteThis is intriguing and mysterious poem. Luv it.
ReplyDeleteLuv what you did to the image.
Happy Sunday
Much💜love
Vivid rendering of restless nights! Some nightmares are not improved by repeated drownings in daylight. Enjoyed the way you shifted the image as well.
ReplyDeleteYou are incredibly creative! I enjoyed this journey into dreamland.
ReplyDeleteFine depiction of A nightmare with aquatic imagery
ReplyDelete"I hear the cries of ancient nightmares" - I think we all do!
ReplyDelete'biding time to resurface...'
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
you skillfully evoke the mood and and uncertainty of night ~
ReplyDelete"I hear the cry of ancient nightmares"
ReplyDeleteLove this line, and the whole dreamy feel to the poem.
The return of "ancient nightmares" might be more entertaining than those dreaded recurring dreams. Ever have then? I had two, they both stopped the same week but I still remember them vividly.
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