I think a thick brick
is not as thick as a plank,
but far swankier.
P.S.Steven says that should be 'thwankier!' He's right!is not as thick as a plank,
but far swankier.
Who says a haiku has to be sensible?
Perhaps I should have gone straight to bed at that point. But no. Instead, I wanderered along a Blogland path or two and found the name Napple Notes had been taken in vain by a Welsh lady (one whom I have visited before) who bears the delightful name of Ada Trellis. It was clear from what she had written, that 'sensible' was probably the last adjective one would choose to describe her penmanship, if her latest post was anything to go by... Click on her name to decide for yourself whether we are sisters under the skin...
Who, indeed?
ReplyDeleteLove it! Who says?
ReplyDeleteat 1.30am a lot of things make sense... just teasing! i love your quirky mind!
ReplyDeleteThat's brilliant! I'll take your brain at 1.30!
ReplyDeletejinksy i think it should read "thwankier".( early in the morning here also!) steven
ReplyDeleteJinksy, I am glad you had time for a 'quickie before bed', I like the idea of a swankier brick.
ReplyDeleteI truly like that word "swankier".
ReplyDeleteNice haiku.
That Welsh lady is definitely the Anti-Jinksy! Sisters? I think ot, or maybe even not.
ReplyDeleteAm off to see if we are sisters under the skin - or over it for that matter.
ReplyDeleteloved it..
ReplyDeleteuneven
thimply thwell....loved it!
ReplyDeletewhat else could you come up with at that time of the night when thleep evades you and thorrows cloud your mind.
ReplyDeleteReally, good enough for me! Sank you..I mean, thank you!!
ReplyDeleteUn-sensible people are the best dreamers of all. Love your haiku.
ReplyDeletethwankier! What can i say!
ReplyDeleteAnd yourself and Ada have much humour in common!
"Thwank you" for sharing your quirky, creative Magpie. Nicely done!
ReplyDeleteAnd if I stayed uo till 1.30 , could I discover a , so far deeply buried , talent for poetry ..... or should I just continue marvelling at your polished haikus , limericks et al. ?
ReplyDeleteFar swankier, indeed!
ReplyDeleteSensible is highly overated - love this short.
ReplyDeleteahhh, writing poetry before bed... and browsing to see what other writers are up to sounds divine...
ReplyDeleteFUN! And no, haikus do not have to be high brow or boring.
ReplyDeleteMost of my best thoughts have been at 1.30 am. Creativity lives in a different time-zone.
ReplyDeleteSensible can be very boring!
ReplyDeleteYou have far too much sense of humour for that to happen!
Maggie X
Nuts in May
I prefer a plank
ReplyDeleteto a brick, however thick,
on a sinking ship.
Sisters under the skin? No I dont think so, maybe distant cousins??
ReplyDeleteErratum: That "I" should read "I'd".
ReplyDeleteEveryone should go without sleep for 24 hours and then write a poem. I think it would be hilarious.
ReplyDeleteThis was terrific.
simple and powerful.
ReplyDeleteI read that poem with peanut butter in my mouth and it was thweet!
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