As promised in my previous post, here are the results of our handiwork. Until I click the publish post button, I shall be holding my breath that Blogger has joined us in word and deed, and that Hilary and Jinksy are woven together on screen as they have been behind the scenes. Hope you enjoy the partnership, but do pop over anytime and see The Smitten Image in all it's singular glory; it will always be worth the trip, I promise!
freeze-framed the quizzical glance
of the gliding gull
float in a nightmare landscape
of water logged dream
haunt the dried flower heads
as they dream of youth flown
and wait patiently for rebirth.
as they dream of youth flown
and wait patiently for rebirth.
poised like a statue on the sill,
watching clouds go passing by
with never once the chance to fly
on scudding paws along the street,
free, excited, swift and fleet.
What dreams go racing through his head
at night, inside his doggy bed?
watching clouds go passing by
with never once the chance to fly
on scudding paws along the street,
free, excited, swift and fleet.
What dreams go racing through his head
at night, inside his doggy bed?
each with a word carved on its face-
Truth for the seeking,
Faith in the finding,
and Wisdom to grant overall grace.
Truth for the seeking,
Faith in the finding,
and Wisdom to grant overall grace.
of a world tip tilted and stationary,
as the discarded board's metal wheels vibrate
with the hum of remembered movement.
painted dragon fly hovers
intoxicated
to greet golden, glow-worm spheres
of lighted windows
of lighted windows
jinsky this is brilliant......a combination of haiku complimenting the photos. I think this is such a wonderful post. Bravo!!!!!!
ReplyDeleteNow I am going over to check your friend you did this with, a great combination of minds here my friend.........:-) Hugs
Methinks this is the start of a formidable partnership!
ReplyDeleteWell worth waiting for, friends. Beautifully written. Beautifully illustrated.
ReplyDeleteWhat a great idea.... combining! A partnership in cyberspace! My friend, Margaret, and I occasionally attempt the same.
ReplyDeleteWonderful partnership!
ReplyDeleteVery pleasing combination.
Nuts in May
By Jingo, Jinksy, I think you've got it! Simply wonderful blending of words and images, styled to suit. At first, I even wondered if the images had been chosen to match your colour scheme! You and Hilary could put these into a book.
ReplyDeleteA fine collaboration in a good idea.
ReplyDeleteBeautiful collaboration.
ReplyDeletewow jinksy. this was unexpected and wonderful!! steven
ReplyDeleteA wonderful collaboration. I love the tapestry of images created in verse and photo!
ReplyDeleteHi Jinksy, the poetry is varied and different to match the variety of photos. You did a great job writing. You are an expert at haiku as well as all forms of poetry. My admiration-ometer must went up for your work and your personality.
ReplyDeleteThese are nothing short of amazing. Wonderful images and words combined. Although nothing like, they remind me of 'The Diary of an Edwardian Lady'.
ReplyDeletePublish and be damned!
Oh, wunnerfula wonerfull. I so loved your words, I rushed over here to send you a thank you and a smile.
ReplyDeleteThese are all lovely jinksy, but IK specially liked the green pine n eedle spray and the last one.
ReplyDeleteJinksy ... wonderful collaboration ... MORE!!!!!
ReplyDeleteJinsky, pal. Thanks for agreeing to do this. I think there might be a few more of these somewhere in the future. Hugs, Hilary
ReplyDeleteWonderful verse and photos.
ReplyDeleteOver from Hilary's .. love that you two did this. A friend who write poetry asked me to collaborate with her on something I think you two might look into ... It's a chapbook (small, 18 - 44 pg. book) competition sponsored by diagram, the University of Arizona's literary magazine. Here is a link to the submission guidelines: http://thediagram.com/contest.html
ReplyDeleteJinksy - you did it! Your clever words so artfully twisted and shaped to Hillary's beautiful photos. Words and Images collide and make for a moving pairing. Loved it. What a wonderful idea.
ReplyDeleteWell I hadn't been by for awhile, had no idea this was coming so it felt like a surpirse party. What a wonderful gift you have shared, you and Hilary. It's like 1+1= more than 2.
ReplyDeleteFun fun fun
The post was just so doggone nice
ReplyDeleteI had to come and see it twice.
Well done, you two. :)
Success I think - no, I'm sure!
ReplyDeleteNever imagined a discarded skateboard could "... vibrate with the hum of remembered movement.", and how poignant for "... dried flower heads ... wait patiently for rebirth."
Probably a latent dream for the likes of me, who considers himself way over the hill ...
Truly lovely job by both of you! Thanks for brightening my day (as always)!
ReplyDeleteSimply FABULOUS!!!! I LOVED EACH ONE! Such a wonderful combination of perfections...perfect photos, and perfect words! You and Hilary are simply dynamic! Yes, I DO hope you do this again! Btw, my favorite is "It's a dog's life standing still...What dreams go racing through his head at night, inside his doggy bed?" What a PERFECT pooch as well! Love, Janine XO
ReplyDeleteand it is all just as wonderful with a second viewing
ReplyDeleteI just came from Hilary's place
your words are lovely
I especially love the poem that accompanies the dog's picture - they paint such a sweet image of what the dog is thinking
well done!!
My favorite:
ReplyDelete"willow branches bow
to greet golden, glow-worm spheres
of lighted windows"
I so enjoyed this, glad you two are working together!
There'll be no stopping you now....
ReplyDeleteWonderful!
I loved the ones about the dragon fly on the glass and the mittens in a pine tree. Wonderful is all I can say.
ReplyDeleteYes, a wonderful co-production.
ReplyDeleteThe first, second and third are my favourites, in word and photo.
saw them over at hilary's and have been meaning to come by and pay you a compliment...these are brilliant...
ReplyDeleteSO glad I stopped by from Hilary's!
ReplyDeleteYour haiku is just wonderful! I attempt haiku but it is never as good as what you create. (And no, I'm not looking for sympathy, just stating a fact.)
You inspire me to try try again!
What a wonderful blog you have!
Loved what you and Hilary did today. Great doings.
ReplyDeleteWell done! Collaborative blogging is a wonderful idea and obviously fruitful.
ReplyDeleteWell done Jinsky.A great effort by you and hilary. I specially liked your poem about the dog in the window. - Dave
ReplyDeleteI look forward to "Hand in Hand - Two." I very much enjoyed every image/poem, but especially liked the doggie in the window. Wonderful collaboration!
ReplyDeletesuch a beautiful partnering. what a wonderful idea the two of you had!
ReplyDeleteI am stopping by from "Smitten..." to let you know, love what you've written!
ReplyDeleteFANTASTIC! I'm here from Hilary's blog and just wanted you to know that I think you and Hilary acheived perfection! WOW!
ReplyDeleteI came in this direction from Hilary's blog, and I think you two are a match made in heaven!! What a great idea.
ReplyDeleteBTW, I've been through h\Havant many times, I used to live in Southampton!
I especially love the photo of the dog in the window. The two of you are a great combination.
ReplyDeleteI'm sorry I didn't see how silly that comment looks.
ReplyDeleteSpecifically: the photo of the dog speaks to me. I can feel how badly the little fellow wants to be outside. Your friend captured a perfect moment, and how fortunate for all the colors to be so complimentary.
You are very good at matching words to pictures. I've admired how you've done it on Fridge Soup. I think this partnership with your photographer friend is worth pursuing.
Wonderful words that appeared on the Smitten Image! You've done well in matching words to Hilary's marvelous photos, well done!
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